Last week, I got a new haircut. My awesome stylist was excited to give me a new ‘do just like the picture I brought in. The only problem: I don’t have enough hair to pull it off right now. I’m a short-hair kind of girl, but I’m striving for chin-length in the near future. So to get my hair in position for this brave new chin-length world, Annie spent a lot of time cutting the various layers and angles into my chocolate mop. Now, as it grows, it will begin to fall into the correct style.
At the end of the haircut, which lasted almost 2 hours, Annie told me that if I went to another stylist, she’d charge me $500 next time I came in because of all the precision work she’d put into the cut. She didn’t want to have to start over with someone else’s layers.
The time and effort Annie spent on my new style made me think about a very basic step we all have to conquer as writers: editing. Every writer has to hone their skills at cutting and trimming the excess in our words as much as crafting those words to begin with.
My background is editing. I have a technical writing degree and I used to run a magazine for a Fortune 50 corporation. I actually am one of those freaks who love a good red pen. One of my professional strengths is “cleaning” copy–making it stronger and tighter without changing the meaning of the writer.
Sometimes, our stories need a professional editor, especially before we submit them to an agent or publisher or enter them in a contest. (If you’re looking for professional editing, send me a note. I’d love to help you.)
But as writers, we also need to develop self-editing skills. Passive vs. active voice, point-of-view continuity, sentence structure, “padding” words, and the dreaded show vs. tell are just a few of the rules we need to look for. There are a lot of great self-editing books out there for authors to study.
Keep in mind, though, that self-editing is a detailed process. You won’t catch everything on the first read-through. Or the second. Or the third. But like all the time Annie spent sculpting and shearing my new hairstyle, the time spent is worth it. Not only does it help you present your best product to the professionals in the industry, each round of editing is like a class where you learn what to look for so you can organically incorporate it into your writing. Good editing helps you become a better writer as you actually put the words on the page.
Writers, share your favorite editing books and websites below. What are your best tips? Let’s help each other out!





